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What I want

Top ten things in my life I want
For these things continue to haunt
So here we go I start off with love
Someone to be there when push comes to shove
Next I want the pleasure to be crowned
A voice for the world of the undergrownd
Third I want an IPOD I cant afford it
Then I want sobriety, for the drug world I already explored it
Number five, I want enlightenment
To continually learn brings excitment
Six is so underrated
Keep the past and the present completly seperated
So seven must be to trust me
I want to know I can rely on my family
To be married to Shakira must be number eight
Baby if you dont want commitment at least give me a date
Number nine, I think I just want a nice car
And number ten I want to remove my scar
A scar left by my past actions
I hope you liked this I want your reactions

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  1. Date: 6/23/2011 4:22:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well-deserved placement. A clever and witty write. :))

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 5:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Adeleke's "Top Ten" contest Sal. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 4:01:00 PM
    My congratulations on this win in the contest of adeleke, Sal

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 2:20:00 PM
    Congrats Sal on your wonderful win in the top ten things contest with this excellent entry luv..enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 10:00:00 AM
    I'm grateful for your support, congrats on your 10th place. Luv, Ade

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 11:23:00 AM
    I love how you incorporated wit into this one Sal.. Quite enjoyed it ;)

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 6:59:00 AM
    Excellent write! A pleasure reading :)