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What Goes Up

What goes up must come down, but what Blair, a disgusting dude, threw in the air was not too appealing. What stuck to the ceiling - not to come down - was Blair’s underwear. Written March 5, 2016 for the What Goes Up Must Come Down Poetry Contest of Catie Lindsey

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Date: 3/11/2016 4:41:00 PM
A disgustingly funny opus, dear Andrea. When that there missile comes down, I don't wanta be around. Love, daver
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Date: 3/9/2016 3:46:00 PM
A clever write Andrea. I think I have read all of your poems now. It is hard catching up. I have been entering more contests, but it sure is time consuming. GL in the contest!
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Date: 3/8/2016 9:21:00 PM
Ha-Ha - very witty ... disgusting on more fronts than one - Lindsay
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Date: 3/8/2016 11:27:00 AM
Funny, Andrea.
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Date: 3/7/2016 2:14:00 PM
Lol.. funny
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Date: 3/6/2016 6:04:00 PM
No you didn't! LOL This is disgustingly funny. Peace my dear:)
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Date: 3/6/2016 10:31:00 AM
very funny Andrea
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Date: 3/5/2016 11:43:00 PM
Andrea, lol, I guess you do not think too much of Blair, this is hilarious, and I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 3/5/2016 9:29:00 PM
Haha.... you made me laugh sweet girl :) good luck in the contest. I still don't know what to write for this one.
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Date: 3/5/2016 7:57:00 PM
Andrea outside your comfort zone on this one lol.. Can't say I enjoyed it, lol. Pictured it in my mind and It put a smile on my face.
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Date: 3/5/2016 6:52:00 PM
Not your usual, good luck in the contest Andrea.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/5/2016 7:24:00 PM
aw come on, Richard. it's a nasty limerick is all!!!
Date: 3/5/2016 4:53:00 PM
Different Andrea, and most welcomed, you certainly sharpen your pen for this one...
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Date: 3/5/2016 2:56:00 PM
Good luck in the contest Andrea! Wasn't that an Earth, Wind, and Fire song, hat goes up?
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Date: 3/5/2016 11:57:00 AM
It happens! A limerick in its intended form. The word crude can be found in the definition. That is what it is meant to be. A Fav!
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Date: 3/5/2016 11:45:00 AM
Ceiling has a big hole so passed by. Nice Limerick, good luck my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 3/5/2016 4:42:00 AM
yuck but a very good limerick Andy hugs 7
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Date: 3/5/2016 1:53:00 AM
EWwww ... I thought it was gum or something ... now I'm wondering what would make it stick! Funny take on the contest ... the rhythm is different than your typical limerick.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/5/2016 7:22:00 PM
haha, Where is your imagination, Timothy?

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