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What caught my eye

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What caught my eye

It was her tender touch
One that made my blood rush
It was her pretty smile
That made me walk the mile
It was her silky hair
One that gave me more flair
It was her truthful eyes
One that made known my lies
Her calculated steps
Did away with all flirts
It was her melodies
One that gave me sweet treats
Her warmth that breaks cool ice
All these, caught my eyes

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  1. Date: 4/28/2012 1:38:00 PM
    this is lovely... i enjoyed reading it.... thanks for sharing....smiles...chiquita

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    Date: 5/1/2012 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 6:45:00 PM
    awww very untraditional..last line {All these, caught my eye} would work a wee bit better and I feel this would be even better presented as a ballad..it wants to be a ballad..listen to it? Light & love

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 10:25:00 AM
    Smile ˜ As a mother cherishes her precious child ˜ Loving they and everything begins changing colours * Love always, John!:) ˜