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What a Liar

Eve Rules Adam Drools {Joseph Spence } My garden Beg Your Pardon Succalant Mango Let's Tango Vineyard Man Work Hard More grapes Apples Ate Bare Essance My preference Why Oh Why Did Adam Try Cause Snaked Lied And Humanity Died

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Brian Strand

Date: 5/31/2010 8:38:00 AM

Like the opening footle Katherine.Rgds Brian

Danny Nunn

Date: 5/31/2010 8:18:00 AM

Funny but so true, great write...thanks on Bomb..kind of how it is on the Mexican border now..Danny

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/31/2010 5:49:00 AM

Okay sis. Slammed me! I just love poetry as a means of creative expression. This would make a great song too. I like your awesome lyrics. Joseph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/30/2010 6:05:00 PM

I read this aloud twice, with my writing table as a drum. A wonderful entry to the contest. Good luck

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/30/2010 5:08:00 PM

Katherine, I hope you and Jenny are doing well. i imagine she is quite the young lady now. These Adam and Eve poems crack me up. I reckon God knew they would both eat the apple when he placed the tree. Why else would he have put it there? I wonder what type of apple it was? I've also always wondered why people didn't turn on the apple like they did the snake. Wouldn't the big juicy red apple be as much a culprit as the rest of the players is this game! YF4L, God Bless, mj

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/30/2010 4:38:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, Katherine...enjoyed reading this winner! Peace, Audrey

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/30/2010 4:29:00 PM

Wow...ended your poem with quite a punch!! Well done, Katherine!!! oh yes...ps..Happy Birthday!! :) Love, Carrie

Skat A

Date: 5/30/2010 1:54:00 PM

HOW COOL AND CREATIVE... LOVED IT

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/30/2010 1:09:00 PM

VERY CLEVER, Katherine! You said it all in a sparsely worded rhyme that hits a home run. And you grab the readers attention so well with the first two witty lines, then carry through to the end. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/30/2010 12:53:00 PM

Great thoughts that you have penned in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara