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WHAT? be calm see how all is specs lines and spaces how nothing really comes together solidity blamed on gravity be calm you! – you a magnet – true artist of the world - gathering gathering specs lines and spaces you! are none of these be calm Dave Austin

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/5/2016 9:28:00 PM

Calmness, this placid state of tranquility, invites serenity. I recovered this by enjoying the weekend away. I had never heard so many tree frogs, Someone described it as being a cacophony of sound. I find the endings akin to a lion purring. It's restful, and reassuring; there'd been no "specs lines and spaces", only sleep.:) Keep well Daver! Love you with a serene heart, Mikki

Daver Austin
Date: 6/6/2016 12:52:00 PM

RRRRRRIIIIIIIBIT! Specs, lines, spaces and FROGS! Hugs, daver

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/5/2016 12:46:00 PM

Love your advice Daver ;) hope you are doing good..