Werewolf

Werewolf Ravage with me Lady Dark Panthera claws of red And thrash against a starving mouth Eaten by tongues and lips Devouring inside surrender Rip upon my skin those tender ache And push your want to digging nails Which renders you helpless Resuscitate your kiss to mine And strip past your urging Tribal heat Throat guttural whisper my name Starve me stretched to your nakedness So I may hunger more Rhythmical impetuous cause The night hears your cries Pinned to the moons cool wall Vampire at you neck Lady Dark Pulls at your flowing red To a ravenous climax Soaking wet upon my knees I emerge from a tidal bliss The slow trickle line of sweat traces down my back Full moon temptress

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Anthony Beesley

Date: 8/25/2010 11:38:00 AM

good and gripping...do i detect a little cross breeding going down?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/6/2010 6:10:00 AM

Hello there envious one, thank you for your kind comment. Now that is what gets my ego going. I figure you know that. Sorry you woke up on the wrong side of your potty. As for me I am faceless with only love up my ass. I chuckled with the thought of wet upon your pants. I will not tell a soul that your poem has no flow. I get bullcr@ped comments myself. Like the ones you have on the bottom here. However being that I do not consider myself a poet, I really enjoyed your comment, Sidney LeeAnn

Brandy Megens

Date: 7/3/2009 11:29:00 AM

how hotttttt and sexy and on fire this poem is my friend woooooooo

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 7/2/2009 2:22:00 AM

There are alot of visuals.Like a sexy Fiction Movie Thriller scene=)<33

Karla Null

Date: 7/1/2009 8:59:00 PM

So vivid is your discription that I see it like a movie playing in my mind. X rated excellance...Karla

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/1/2009 3:44:00 PM

Wow, Colin! You always deliver amazing writes. There has often been a lot of sexual activity associated with vampires, but werewolves (being men converted by the "Full moon temptress") have quite a bit of supernatural appeal for me. This is a far better "story" than any of the werewolf movies! Love, Carolyn