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Monologs aside pages turning in time hungry words crowd your mind no excuses left behind earth crumbles under your shoes the key turns slowly but you can not reach it rhyme does not roam here fate does not roam here life does not roam here love does not roam here you do not belong here but you can't get out...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/17/2010 12:04:00 PM
I really enjoyed the repetition you used in this poem. The last two lines really bring this poem together and give it a great voice. Take care! -Mike
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Date: 9/17/2010 12:02:00 PM
reminds me of slavery...I guess because I just read a poem on slavery. sad write could be interpreted many ways. stop by and read my works if you are brave....I need a new victim....;)
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