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WEEPY Most healthy,active baby in the ward, No sign of illness from any angle, Was a charm in the kiddo squad, Mom's pride of bubbliness in her triangle. Injection led him to unconsciousness, Operation theatre became his last place Forever, vanished all his cheerfulness, All shocked in grief,unexpected case. In ICU he was still,baby baby I scream, Where did I go wrong,you leave, Tears flood into a stream, No!No! I console myself ,not to believe. Treasured are two years with my chubby, Missing you,depression seeps to moisten my face, Open arms to hug you are empty, My cherub,in heaven to you I 'll embrace. Rhyme scheme-AB AB (Quatrain) Contest-Weepy. Sponsor-Laura Loo Date-22 may 2016

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Date: 5/28/2016 11:00:00 PM
Thank you.....regards
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Date: 5/23/2016 6:44:00 AM
Thank you.......Regards
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Date: 5/22/2016 8:34:00 PM
So sad, Rizwana, and I am sorry for your great loss. Congrats in the contest with this heartfelt poem.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 5/23/2016 6:45:00 AM
Thanks.....regards
Date: 5/22/2016 7:18:00 PM
Rizwana, very sad, and whenever I hear about babies is breaks my heart. thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 5/23/2016 6:50:00 AM
I an also very emotional person......tried to express....liked participating....thak you....regards

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