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Weeping

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~~ Beyond my sorrow, there is a path that beckons; I could go that way . . . Or stay and hold hands with death, and weep upon a cold stone . . . ___________________________ August 16, 2014 Tanka Entered in the contest, Any 5 line Poem, Poet Destroyer First Place

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  1. Date: 10/24/2014 11:05:00 AM
    this is deep so very beautifully penned dear friend excellent piece

  1. Date: 9/10/2014 6:07:00 PM
    Consummate wisdom displayed through superb use of form and text.... congratulations...... Jake

    Wings Avatar Broken Wings
    Date: 9/11/2014 2:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    John, thanks for your kind words, I tend to write on the deep side ~~
  1. Date: 9/4/2014 7:05:00 AM
    You always write that touches the heart, congrats on this top place, constance

    Wings Avatar Broken Wings
    Date: 9/6/2014 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks DR, Ram~~
  1. Date: 9/4/2014 4:17:00 AM
    Congratulations on your Number One spot with this profound and moving piece Constance! Blessings, Connie

    Wings Avatar Broken Wings
    Date: 9/6/2014 5:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Connie ~~
  1. Date: 9/3/2014 11:22:00 PM
    Wow, so much in 5 lines. Well done and congrats on your win.

    Wings Avatar Broken Wings
    Date: 9/6/2014 5:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Brenda
  1. Date: 9/3/2014 11:05:00 PM
    top win for a top haiku many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

    Wings Avatar Broken Wings
    Date: 9/6/2014 5:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jan
  1. Date: 9/3/2014 10:33:00 PM
    Hi Broken Wing, it is nice having you on my winning list. I sure love your style... Congratulations, on your win:) Stop by and enjoy my blog, "Edgar Allan Poe" if you'd like or have time. Always ~LINDA~

    Wings Avatar Broken Wings
    Date: 9/6/2014 6:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much, Linda, for my placement in your contest, I am honoured ~~
  1. Date: 8/25/2014 9:28:00 AM
    A 7 rating for a beautiful write, Constance! ... very touching. I know what I would do, but the choice is yours. // paul

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    Date: 9/6/2014 6:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wings Avatar Broken Wings
    Date: 9/6/2014 6:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh thank you Paul for your support and kind words ~~
    Callus Avatar Paul Callus
    Date: 9/4/2014 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ..and Congratulations on your first place in the contest!! very merited:) // paul
    Wings Avatar Broken Wings
    Date: 8/27/2014 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Paul, some would not understand my words, happy that you did ~~
  1. Date: 8/17/2014 8:14:00 AM
    Beautiful expressions on life and death, Constance

    Wings Avatar Broken Wings
    Date: 8/18/2014 7:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Dr. Ram for the support ~~
  1. Date: 8/16/2014 9:38:00 PM
    wowowow, a big SEVEN . How are you, Constance?

    Wings Avatar Broken Wings
    Date: 8/18/2014 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Andrea, I am fine thanks, thanks for the "7" much appreciated~~
  1. Date: 8/16/2014 5:53:00 PM
    wow, this is just awesome - a big, big winner, for sure x

    Wings Avatar Broken Wings
    Date: 8/18/2014 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Jack, it did not win in the contest but I still love it and thank you for your forever support ~~
  1. Date: 8/16/2014 4:53:00 PM
    Ohh very deep PD will like this write:-) Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx

    Wings Avatar Broken Wings
    Date: 8/16/2014 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Jan for your support and encouragement, I hope PD does like it ~~