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Weenie Princess

Patches of choco brown and black wrap my fur with long hotdog body, I roll in loops, “ Hershey” is what they fondly name me flopping ears as mice and ants rush for a kill… and with the kids, nose snuggles for tickle feast while Mom runs amuck with suds on her hair; these bug me, bathing and trimming of nails. When holidays come, it’s fashion show time like a German spy, I nibble the costumes feigning sleep as teeth snarl those threads! Loyal and cute, my almond eyes wink to charm… but bark I do when strangers knock , and Hannah, our neighbor trembles as I “arf” at her mere scent. I love to sneak out the gate to play and goof off; one day, a runaway thrill off the street did harm… a rogue snatched me , bugged my neck hearing faint shouts, “ Hershey, come back!” Oh,I miss the awful hair washes, patter of kids’ feet, warm cuddles, and dog gone evening tricks. For eight years, I reigned as a Weenie princess… Now, I look at the stars and touch my family’s faces. ----------- *it’s been 3 years since our dachshund, Hershey, got lost. My nephews and I miss her! rob carmack's Dachshunds Contest

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Date: 2/1/2015 2:44:00 PM
NETTE, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 1/29/2015 2:27:00 PM
Beautifully penned Nette but oh so sad:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/27/2015 12:28:00 PM
this was so touching.BIG congrats on your big win.
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Date: 1/27/2015 5:21:00 AM
O Weenie princess…sorry/ C'grats nette on win. Rajat
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Date: 1/26/2015 4:44:00 PM
Nette, good descriptive write, it is so cute and heartbreaking. Congratulations on your win and a 7. Blessings dear friend eve
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Date: 1/26/2015 3:30:00 PM
Perfect ending line. Thanks and congrats Nette.
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Date: 7/22/2012 10:10:00 PM
nette, congratulations in Tanya Harrington, "Dog gone tales" contest.. have your self a good night. ;-) always~PD
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Date: 7/18/2012 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Tanya's "Dog Gone Tales" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2012 4:56:00 PM
congrats Nette luv on another fab win for this fine entry for dog's life.. with our foir pups we have lots of entertainment to write about.. another grand piece luv..
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations Nette, on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/17/2012 12:06:00 PM
Nette, just a quick congrats on your win..David
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Date: 7/17/2012 5:17:00 AM
Got a little lump in my throat reading this, Nette...my daughter and grandaughter have weenie dogs...one is hyper as heck and the other one could care less...congratulations! - Tim
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place nette I enjoyed this very much as all your work xx
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Date: 7/16/2012 8:46:00 PM
A sweet story, Nette. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/28/2012 8:20:00 AM
Such a sweet write - and so sad at the end. Thanks, Nette - great contest : )
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Date: 6/28/2012 7:23:00 AM
Awwweeee but some fine memories...Enjoyed this !!
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Date: 6/26/2012 7:27:00 PM
this is so sad, that she got abducted? So were you just imagining what became of her? That is heartbreaking at the end, Nette. Yes, my dog Ollyver was miniature Eskimo, god rest his soul.
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Date: 6/26/2012 10:45:00 AM
Aww the heartbreaking tale you have told here Nette! I hate to hear of you losing such a wonderful companion! You told the write so very well my friend, including all the feelings that the dog would have with each occurrence! The dog descriptions were so tender and so awesomely done I thought I was actually the dog there for a minute! I am very sorry for your loss, I know you must still be crushed! I know how it feels to lose an animal friend! This is a wondrous write, I just love it! Great Work
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Date: 6/26/2012 7:11:00 AM
Just a year ago I lost my fourteen year companion to death..He was a Rat Terrier..He was part of the family..That was hard but one just coming up missing would be even harder for one would not know what happened to him or her..Enjoyed your creative work on this topic that touches many families..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent at my work..Sara
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Date: 6/26/2012 3:49:00 AM
Always be missing......lovely poem for a princess. - Luck in contest for you nette. - Have a beautiful day. - oxox Anne-Lise
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