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Weekend Enticements

You try to entice me With the smell of coffee and pancakes. I bury my head deeper under the covers And ignore your ploy. Naked, I walk into the kitchen, My turn to entice. I run back to the bed and dive beneath the covers, Giggling. The pancakes are cold, I win.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/14/2011 10:31:00 AM
A big FAVE too
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Date: 3/14/2011 10:28:00 AM
This is AWESOME, and delicious!!! congratulations.
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:01:00 AM
Whoa Hot one Francine. I can so imagine this. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 3/9/2011 4:12:00 AM
Way to go Francine, oh don't we just love to entice? I really enjoyed this one, congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 3/8/2011 10:28:00 PM
The pancakes would never even had a chance! Way to go for winning both ways with this playful & witty poem, Francine :) Super congrats on your win :D!!
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:20:00 PM
Congrats Francine on another great win in Chris's contest ... awesome as always my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/8/2011 5:33:00 PM
Oh, I remember this one. It's awesome. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/8/2011 2:12:00 PM
The first word in the second verse grabbed my attention. Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest.
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Chris, Francine
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Date: 3/8/2011 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris's contest Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2011 10:04:00 AM
LOL you go gal!!! Great win! And in a very modern style too! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:18:00 AM
This joyful and playful poem is delightful!! So glad to see it in the winning circle! You rascal you!! :)
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Date: 1/11/2011 10:04:00 PM
How descriptively nice! Good work here.
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Date: 11/18/2010 10:48:00 AM
Nice one Francine, what people in love should do and more often as well >> James :)
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Date: 11/17/2010 10:39:00 AM
I can't stop laughing, Francine. If you have a good man around the house, who needs pancakes? Best to you, Diane
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Date: 11/17/2010 8:39:00 AM
Oh, this one is so funny, Francine. It sounds like he was trying to please you and you had a great time teasing him with your naked trek through the kitchen. :) Enjoyed! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/16/2010 9:44:00 PM
This is very beautful indeed.I really felt the rhythm and movements of your thoughts,Francis
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