Wee Prick

deranged snapshots of reality full-moon's analytical quagmires conceptualizing archetypes, creating art of duplications venturing prickled duplicity, slapped me bout sideways insinuated tacklin' romance, uncompromising twist since you thought me a maniacal ***** took a spin on the wily horizons landed horizontal 'tween thighs 'twas a wee prick of somethin' naught patter of heartbeats, whitewashed the lunacy off my derriere & cleavage attempting to forget the writing on the cosmos when it beckoned me to your teensy universe

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/20/2016 8:33:00 AM

It's a small world, after all... (apolojeez to Walt)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2016 5:50:00 PM

oh my, you TELL 'im, woman!!!

Darren White

Date: 11/23/2016 11:08:00 AM

Chuckling :) Gay guys get it ;)

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/23/2016 5:31:00 AM

Meaning or no meaning, enigmatically beautiful ...

Jannie Breedt

Date: 11/23/2016 12:34:00 AM

Oh Paloma, you keep out writing everyone Your use of innuendo mixed in with the phletora of grammar and vocabulary throws me in the ditch. Getting a comment from you is like opening a present. Wondering what the "P" stands for? Perhaps Picasso?

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/22/2016 7:29:00 PM

For some reason I could not get past the whitewashed derriere and cleavage. Lol Oh well, as they say, if the small shoe fits... I wear size 13, in case your wondering. All of you women are liars, saying size doesn't matter. Who are you trying to convince? This is laugh out loud funny, Paloma:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 11/22/2016 7:32:00 PM

I'm guessing, the rendezvous was unproductive:)

Chris Green

Date: 11/22/2016 5:21:00 PM

Ha, that last line is killer. When I saw the title I thought, "Phew, at least this one isn't about me". :) This was as funny as it is crazy good. You have a erected a damn good, albeit short poem here Paloma. Wow, Pee Wee's Playhouse takes on a entirely new meaning now. This was fantastic. Oh and the validation code for this comment is 3in...not sure what that means. :)

Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 5:27:00 PM

Give that man a prize! Aren't you the brave soul Chris? Ha, laughing @ 'it's not about you' ;) I don't know what it means either, but I won't venture a guess, I'm in enough hot water with the guys as it is!