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Wedding Rehearsal-musings

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Wedding Rehearsal-musings

Baffled  stood  the  flower  girl,
I was scooped  up  in  groom's  arms. 
'neath the gazebo we  stood,
his  glinting  eyes  keen.

"Will  hold  you  close  to  my  heart,
keep  you  tacked, no  ducking  out;
reckon  time  will  slow  crawl, till
you  become  my  bride."


10th place in the contest
For Contest : "Wedding Rehearsal-Dodoitsu"
Sponsored by Dr Ram Mehta
Written by Gautami Phookan

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  1. Date: 5/18/2011 7:44:00 AM
    you go, gautami!! my whistling cheers for the award! :) hugggs

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 10:35:00 PM
    sounds like true love,Gautami. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 5:35:00 PM
    Gautami, Great entry. Congratulations on your poem's honor in the winning circle. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 2:08:00 PM
    Gautami, Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest. Way to go! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 1:17:00 PM
    Congrats Gautami on your amazing win in the Wedding Rehearsal contest with this excellent entry my friend.. back to back wins ..phenomenal for sure..luv.. enjoy another treasured win with luv..

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 12:48:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 12:03:00 PM
    Congratulations on the tenth place win in my contest, Gautami

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 4:07:00 PM
    a very interesting development at a wedding rehersal. A unique write!

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 3:31:00 PM
    Oh, that's such a cute dodoitsu, Gautami. All little flower girls dream of becoming brides one day. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn