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Weather's Blend

There once was a desperate lonely old man walking through hot desert Sun. He was completely sand blown and all his garments dangling totally undone. But he walked as a sharp shooter aimed bowed and arrowed in the Sun’s way, He seemed to be searching indefatigably for a higher score on a brighter day! His whole entire world he had left, Leaving each of everything behind! He could feel his sunshades begin to slide slip and melt. That poor old man was about to lose his beautiful mind. Then he looked up at the vast Sun and this is what he said Me! Oh! My! “I Do As I Must So Now As I Must Give My High Recommend”, A dash of this or toss of that brews my seasonal mixtures into weather’s blend! I really, truly and knowingly do give you my honorable High Recommend, Just so I can commend my natural amends coursing thy self on honors end!

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Date: 8/12/2009 11:36:00 AM
Very inspirational! But for the armed sharpshooter, I could not help but think of Christ's struggles in the desert and the temptations that faced him. I would give this poem my "High Recommend." Great work! Love, Carolyn
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