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Soaking Branches snap Sharp winds slice while thunder strikes A storm is coming

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/28/2009 4:32:00 PM
Nice use of alliteration and imagery for a creative view. I really like the first line. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!! Karen
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Date: 11/22/2009 6:04:00 PM
The first line is excellent, saturated branches can't bear that wait. Nice work...Raul
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Date: 11/22/2009 2:35:00 PM
a very good haiku
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