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weather right now

Soaking Branches snap 
Sharp winds slice while thunder strikes
A storm is coming

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  1. Date: 11/28/2009 4:32:00 PM
    Nice use of alliteration and imagery for a creative view. I really like the first line. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!! Karen

  1. Date: 11/22/2009 6:04:00 PM
    The first line is excellent, saturated branches can't bear that wait. Nice work...Raul

  1. Date: 11/22/2009 2:35:00 PM
    a very good haiku