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We Will Drink Some Nectar Sweet

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We’ll Drink Some Nectar Sweet hummingbirds, bumblebees dart amongst the blooms wings almost invisible move beneath butterflies flutter sweet nectar consume laden ambrosia drips down petal leaves wings almost invisible move beneath morning sun bathed wet with tinseling dew laden ambrosia drips down petal leaves as zephyrs breeze flourish new born buds full morning sun bathed wet with tinseling dew new depth of glamour love spills where they breathe as zephyrs breeze flourish new born buds full fuzzy bumblebees buzz life from bloom to weave new depth of glamour love spills where they breathe butterflies flutter sweet nectar consume fuzzy bumblebees buzz life from bloom to weave hummingbirds, bumblebees dart amongst the blooms 7/3/2016

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Date: 7/8/2016 11:43:00 AM
- This is really beautiful Eve, enjoy reading - Small things in life that make you happy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/6/2016 9:53:00 AM
You make this style of poetry seem effortless, great work. So many wonderful lines in your poem .."fuzzy bumblebees buzz life from bloom to weave"...love that line. Great poem.
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Date: 7/4/2016 1:07:00 PM
how vivid can this picture be, eve... a lovely work of floral art!..huggs
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Date: 7/4/2016 7:46:00 AM
Hello Eve, An exquisitely rendered Pantoum. Great Work on this. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 7/4/2016 7:00:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Date: 7/4/2016 6:09:00 AM
A feast for the eyes and ears, a gift for the touch and smell ...
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Date: 7/4/2016 3:07:00 AM
Lovely choice of words:)
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Date: 7/4/2016 1:01:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/3/2016 9:49:00 PM
Lovely and enthralling, such a joy to read ... CayCay
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Date: 7/3/2016 7:31:00 PM
Mrs Eve, the form itself is beautiful but with your words it is truly a piece of art. Thank you for sharing.
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