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We met, a brief moment in time, a passing encounter, a long goodbye. From the beginning it seemed only goodbye, missing each moment before it passed, longing for time, Tick, Tick, Tick, the sound of your heart beat, your golden eyes, sad eyes, shadows haunting me, your form cast on cottony clouds, the silvery beast stealing you, the time is gone. We are gone. silhouette on glass your image lingers in me sweet bird fly away We are together, time passes, but I see you... again. Beautiful island, reflections of you, mountains, beaches, cascading falls, all are you. Exotic beauty, mine for a moment, walks in the forest holding hands, lost in the trees laughing, white skin bronzing in the sun, soft skin, supple and smooth, pineapples and strawberries and passion... fruit, I leave. We are you and me...again. only thoughts of you sadness is my companion what poor company We marry! Love, joy, happiness, our time has come, together now, my dream, our dream fulfilled. We are we. our time has begun you and me now so much more together as we 08/10/15 Any poem trashed in a recent contest-9th Place Broken Wings 9/30/2015 HAIBUN Contest-NA scott thirtyseven 8/10/2015

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Date: 1/2/2016 5:28:00 PM
Hey, here is one on that list you sent me that I am now able to see. And I see you finally got a win. GOOD for you. It deserved to be on a winner list. It was very romantic!
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James Inman
Date: 1/2/2016 8:43:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 9/5/2015 12:32:00 PM
James, Congrats on your win... LUV ~SKAT~
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James Inman
Date: 9/5/2015 1:14:00 PM
Thanks for the visit SKAT
Date: 9/5/2015 10:44:00 AM
Great imagery James, congrats on big win!
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James Inman
Date: 9/5/2015 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Dr.
Date: 9/5/2015 10:40:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and a lovely story with a happy ending! I enjoyed reading your poem, James. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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James Inman
Date: 9/5/2015 1:13:00 PM
Thanks Kim
Date: 9/4/2015 5:33:00 PM
So glad to see this showcased In Broken Wings contest james:-) I thought the imagery was beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 9/4/2015 8:52:00 PM
Sorry Jan, that I was supposed to be a J. Too much of a hurry.
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James Inman
Date: 9/4/2015 8:48:00 PM
Thank you Ian.
Date: 8/18/2015 7:10:00 AM
Your last line is a stunner. However I feel that your last prose lacks the elegance of the first two. So, while I would like to thank you for entering my contest, and in doing so making it the success that it has been, I am sorry to say that this piece will not be going through to the final 20. However I will be giving this poem a honourable mention, so that others can follow the link, and enjoy.
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James Inman
Date: 8/18/2015 7:28:00 AM
Thank you, Scott, for taking your time to comment on your decision. It is much appreciated and I totally agree. Perhaps a re-write on the last prose is in order. Wonderful contest. I love the Haibun form. Thanks again.
Date: 7/25/2015 8:30:00 PM
This is very good with superb imagery and the emotion grabs you from the start and never lets go. Emile.
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James Inman
Date: 7/26/2015 1:57:00 PM
Your too kind, Emile. Thank you.

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