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The hammer teaches us how to play Bed of stones beckoning with the hand The cries of my younger's provide energy Work hard for a bread Though I am a kid Yet mature! Metallic sounds, Drops from dry bones, Cool my body. Father doesn't know us Maybe He is reading my face! Mom is too ill to work Her kind hands, Fight with a hammer, Do hard in the battle of betrothal Silent Cries And Her worthy love Matures me. You can again betray with Her daughter!!

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Date: 7/6/2014 1:49:00 PM
Litan Such a powerful, deep and heart wrenching poem. I could feel the emotion in each line coming from your heart and soul. Thank you for the great comment on my Lies And Guys poem.
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Date: 7/10/2014 3:47:00 AM
Yes! That was from heart...Thanks a lot for your nice comment
Date: 9/20/2013 8:20:00 AM
Litan, you are a good poet. Congratulations.....SKAT
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Date: 9/21/2013 11:10:00 PM
Thanks skat...no doubt you are also a good writer,Have a nice sunday
Date: 9/15/2013 7:39:00 PM
Congrats - Nice going. Ralph
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Litan Dey
Date: 9/15/2013 9:14:00 PM
Thank you so much ralph for passing by and appreciation.
Date: 9/15/2013 12:20:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your win in the contest..Soup Mail soon..Sara
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Date: 9/15/2013 12:32:00 PM
Thank you sara for your appreciation.......
Date: 9/15/2013 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Morgan and Dr. Mehta for your nice visit to my work and appreciation....
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Date: 9/15/2013 4:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win.Morgan
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Date: 9/15/2013 3:56:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning in the contest, Litan
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Date: 9/14/2013 6:09:00 PM
Hi Litan, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my contest with this amazing poem and imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""The Wind."" OR blog! "Tears in Heaven" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15911&PoetID=18720 --take care Always & Forever <3 Linda
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Date: 9/14/2013 8:30:00 PM
Thank you PD.....have a relaxed weakened.
Date: 9/8/2013 6:57:00 AM
Sounds like this is part of a hard life, but you take a lot from each experience and are very perceptive.
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Date: 9/5/2013 5:38:00 PM
Litan, this poem is deep....xox..Linda
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Date: 9/2/2013 3:04:00 AM
- Lovely poem, Litan ... you write very well (child .. lol). . All the best to you, my dear friend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2013 11:44:00 PM
Thank you for call me a child and for nice visit to your child's work.Have a good day

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