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Watermelon Summer

That was the summer... Of watermelon fields, and hot, humid days Of suntanned traces, and mosquito-bit faces When the purpose of knees Was to be skinned Of running down a country road Bare feet on hot asphalt Criss-crossing across an open field Helping ourselves To thick pink crimson chunks That melted cool on sun-parched tongues Dribbling from chins Leaving the best part The black bullet seeds To be spit out in rapid fire Against the wind Against the dusty ground Against each other And when the ammunition was spent A pillowed head, among the vines To dream on clouds that whispered by In the blue afternoon sky That watermelon summer ___________________________________________________________ For Skat's Contest: Summer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/16/2010 2:08:00 PM
those sure were the days. sounds like heaven to me. beautiful write Carrie. it must be a most special memory for you. warm congrats on your well deserved win. love & hugs, shar oxo
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Date: 2/16/2010 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Mac's Contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2010 3:34:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Mac's contest.. a wonderful win and a delightful poem .. cannot wait for Summer to arrive.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/19/2009 11:03:00 AM
Such a picture of summer and those lovely watermelons... Such a picture it portrays..
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Date: 6/16/2009 11:50:00 AM
This evokes such crisp memories of my own childhood, watermelon and farms...well written Carrie! glad you enjoyed my fingerprints poem also,. Thank you for your comments. ~Trudy~
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Date: 6/8/2009 5:02:00 PM
in this we share. we share the summers the sun the waiting almost untill their ripe. the dusty road that tractors grade. oh i remember the days. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 6/7/2009 9:10:00 AM
Ahhh,..those fire spit'n days ! TY for the mems ! Loved this one,..dang,..you write quite well there girlie ! james
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Date: 6/7/2009 7:22:00 AM
We would go and picnic in the mountains and my dad would wedge the watermelon in the mountain stream. Later we would eat that ice cold watermelon. This is so lovely and brings back so many memories. Very well done. Love Heidie
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Date: 6/7/2009 7:13:00 AM
i love your watermelon summer. I can taste that juice. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/7/2009 6:34:00 AM
Beautiful memories Carrie...sweetly written and presented.
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Date: 6/7/2009 12:43:00 AM
Lovely vignette Carrie as Jim says one for the favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 6/6/2009 8:12:00 PM
just magnificent imagery! Carrie! must fav this! really fun to feel every line! THANK-YOU! Jim
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