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Partir c'est mourir un peu.. Att skiljas är att dö en smula. Av barn, fyllon och dårar får man höra sanningen. Det är bäst att bita i det sura äpplet. Den dagen, den sorgen. The Story Begins I remember long ago of night time kisses Full of desire and apprehension, that you would disperse You proclaimed your love, into my ear I slept alone, the brisk cold hiding my fear I would talk of dreams and foreign places You begged me to go on and fulfill your dreams Grand Manier nights , sad morning rays Long gone was my love with golden hair Daniel was not her lover Under starry nights she held him close I was nothing more than a friendly stranger That he adored, and the son I never had St Adolph would be my tormentor On horses we rode in blankets of snow Towards our destinies apart Our fireplace of passion, we soon would depart Like the brothers of Seville I too was caught between two worlds She would leave my heart in the cold of the rivers edge From this day I became one of the walking dead

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Date: 2/17/2014 7:46:00 AM
dearest Arthur I am so sorry you were insulted by a poet who should know better this is a wonderful pen my friend keep writing big hugs
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Date: 2/17/2014 12:21:00 AM
Dear Arthur: You write in a very unique way. I like this. Got to work hard to follow your ideas. Thanks. Leon
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Date: 2/17/2014 12:19:00 AM
Nicely written Arthur. You did not deserve such an uncouth comment from that individual below. One question: The "Grand Manier nights" you have in your second verse. Are you referrring to the French orange-flavored liquer? If so, then it is spelled "Grand Marnier".
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Date: 2/16/2014 12:56:00 PM
This is another lovely write of yours.Thanks again for sharing.... Lucilla
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/16/2014 9:42:00 PM
Yo soy Payaso, so it is I who must thank you for such kind words!!!
Date: 2/16/2014 7:40:00 AM
This is exceptional Arthur. I had to read it more than once. It leaves me somewhat confused in the most delightful way. Bravo!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/16/2014 9:42:00 PM
thank you! I think! LOL
Date: 2/16/2014 3:10:00 AM
This is a strong poem here , I'm trying to understand it all , French I know a little of , I'm unsure about the other language , It seems Germanic in part .
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/16/2014 9:49:00 PM
Den dagen, den sorgen. = That day, that grief
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Date: 2/16/2014 9:48:00 PM
Av barn, fyllon och dårar får man höra sanningen. = Of Children, drunks and fools, they all will tell you the truth!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/16/2014 9:47:00 PM
Sorry, Maybe I should have put those lines at the end. They were simply some proverbs or expressions that influenced what I wrote. -- Partir c'est mourir un peu.. Att skiljas är att dö en smula. Both in French and Swedish, means, to seperate is to die a little ---
Date: 2/15/2014 11:03:00 PM
"Johhny that was rude, I admire this poet, petty jealousies have no place here" Well done Arthur this is outstanding as expected from you....Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/16/2014 9:51:00 PM
Your kind words are very much appreciated , not sure this was a good write, but the attempt is better than not trying at all! Thank you!!

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