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Waterfall

Heavenly thoughts,rings of water do flow.... Sunlight reflecting obscure vision perturbed Who do you say I am? I surely don't know I cannot answer for the water is disturbed. As the deer come to sip, I also sip slow I wonder who she is ...says my sorrowful soul I don't see clearly so how could I know. With waterfall near,my blurred image does flow Afternoon glints on water now still I know who I am now as I deeply think I see my soul now perfectly clear. As within the depths while I pause for a drink Heaven awaits me pondering my fate Now clearly I see who I am sitting here I must return home for it's getting late Thinking so deep with waterfall near

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Date: 6/6/2016 5:08:00 PM
Very descriptive piece, Cheryl. Waterfalls are extremely alluring. Lovely piece to read. Barry.
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Cheryl Koko Koomoa
Date: 6/7/2016 7:20:00 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting on this. I do seek nature places as much as I can.. ALOHA, Barry!
Date: 6/6/2016 8:48:00 AM
Beautiful with great imagery. You captured the scene so well. Love the rhyme and rhythm of your poem reflecting the flow of the water. Great job.
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Cheryl Koko Koomoa
Date: 6/7/2016 7:22:00 AM
Oh I appreciate that so much,Seosamh! I'm glad to meet you. Aloha Cheryl

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