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Below is the poem entitled Waterfall which was written by poet Amanda Sullivan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Like a cloudburst,
a flux of cascading water,
a critical current,
a deluge,
like an effusion of bodily fluid,
but somewhat through the whooshing sound,
sends soothing, blissful thought's to ones brain,
the pounding of the deep blue water,
one feels less anxious here on after.

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  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:13:00 AM
    Very effectively descriptive... Terry