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Water of Life

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What difference to me Is the source of the pain, From an ancient salt ocean Or a pool of spring rain. The clever deceptions Of color, grace and form Veil the singular predations Of a savage, feeding swarm. From deadly microbe To frenzied piranha, Shocking my tingler to The Great White Flick O' Rama. The water of life shall be The death of me this year. Coincidentally, it is ice that soothes My puffy, red jellyfish tears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/12/2016 12:31:00 AM
Love the nature of how you describe water in this expertly written poem, Tom...excellent, a 7 :)
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Tom Arnone
Date: 6/12/2016 12:57:00 AM
Thanks, Laura. I can't seem to grasp the popularity of this minor piece; but, I'm not complaining. :-)
Date: 4/22/2016 7:01:00 PM
Wonderful images and engaging ambiguity...so many things it could be...
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Date: 4/21/2016 11:53:00 AM
Sad (yet clever) way of expressing the water of life... LINDA
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Date: 4/21/2016 1:34:00 PM
I think I might prefer pure, untouched moon-water (see "Wet Moon").... ;-)

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