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Out of the vastness of void
God called water into being
And as the first rain drop formed 
Suspended before her Master’s eyes
Arrested by the sight of his brilliance 
She captured a portion of spirit most divine!
His beauty, glorious and incredible
Found her delirious with joy!
And a midst the vacuous silence, 
Her eternal song arose
Echoing throughout the deep
Came a solitary sigh of ecstasy; ascending 
Reaching a thunderous roar… 
She'd ride the four winds forever!

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  1. Date: 7/31/2013 10:56:00 AM
    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:49:00 PM
    superb Annalise congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 1:56:00 PM
    Annalise, congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 1:35:00 PM
    wonderful write Annalise....congrats on your win

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 4:50:00 AM
    Anna this is really beautiful. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 8:30:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this very expressive work this morn..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Not exactly sure what you are saying though..Is it about God creating water and wind and their response to God?..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Haick Avatar Annalise a.k.a. Audrey Haick
    Date: 7/27/2013 7:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Sara, I'm sorry for the delayed response..I don't think that we had this feature to reply in early 2012...but yes, this is about God, the creator of all things, Water, being the title.
  1. Date: 1/14/2012 6:13:00 AM
    touching and oh so beautiful written Annalise! loved it 100% from first to last line:) It carries the fine spirit of the writer

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 9:51:00 PM
    I agree with everything Greg says below.

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 8:47:00 PM
    Wow, what imagery, and so beautiful. I enjoyed it very much, Greg

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 6:21:00 PM
    Wow, Annalise. THis is really good writing. What inspired this from you? LOVE it.

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 6:08:00 PM
    Very imaginative and romantic, love it, Brenda :)

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 5:44:00 PM
    A very touching piece here.

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 5:42:00 PM
    annalise, how are you? delightful and marvelous in language and imagery..the treasure box of your poetic gems is filled to overflow. ..:) huggs!