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Watching

Sitting quietly at my table Moist eyes glued upon the paper That opens to me a clear sight To the landscape of your insight. With words that describe a Monet Filtering through dusty clouds set Beginning their separate ways By your sun's strengthening bright rays. Opens a world of true colors Found in a new spring day splendor Where the long blades of grass are filled With bright wild flowers, never stilled. Caught in the dance of the sweet breeze With the sun's widening rays, steals A woman, holding a sun shade Smiles, with sparkling eyes as she waves. And I dare not look at who she is For the artist's love is not missed. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 09.04.10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/18/2011 2:39:00 PM
thank you for commenting on Grandma's Rocking chair
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Date: 3/11/2011 1:58:00 PM
Enjoyed reading ..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2011 3:34:00 PM
Congrad's on getting ALL three of your verses through round 1 of the sites International Contest! Light & Love
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:08:00 PM
Congrats Caroline on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv..
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Caroline. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/2/2011 3:43:00 PM
Congrats Caroline on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all today with luv.. wishing u a very Happy New Year...
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Date: 9/4/2010 3:12:00 PM
such a adoring and loving write, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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Date: 9/4/2010 2:47:00 PM
This poem is so lovely and captivating, a delight to read.. love Constance
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Date: 9/4/2010 2:40:00 PM
your brush is the stroke of a pen(or keyboard) very nice...peace , jay
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Date: 9/4/2010 1:18:00 PM
This is so beautiful...love Scarlett
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