Warmth

The soft downy snow Forms a blanket over me I am strangely warm.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/10/2013 6:03:00 PM

You are so sweet I thought I'd give you some haiku help print out this checklist. It's the simplest all inclusive list I have found. Other that that until you get the hang of it which can take YEARS [subject line 1/action line 2/surprise association line 3] The verse above has lines 1 & 2 OK!! line three needs to be something else ;) related but slightly different & factual! https://sites.google.com/site/graceguts/essays/haiku-checklist

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/25/2013 6:32:00 AM

Oh Debbie.....coming back and checking my old poems, and I still haven't gotten it right! ;) Thanks for the tips! :)