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Warming

In naked feet she marvels the floor must unravel night's biting cold a champagne will do its chore; warmed body in moments from devouring sip, as wine bathing her softy velvet lips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/14/2008 4:09:00 PM
I had never seen this form before. The poem's very nice. Line 1 period at the end. Line 2 capital M, period at chore. Line 4 capital W. Line 9 lips.
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Date: 10/21/2008 8:28:00 PM
Very romantic and vivid full of emotion and feeling. Nice write . Blessings Michael
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Date: 10/18/2008 4:39:00 PM
love this write, it evokes memories and i can feel the warmth within this write, it plays on one's mind, take cae D-nyce
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Date: 10/17/2008 11:20:00 PM
This is a poem I can truly relate with! i also like drinking once in a while... brgds. George
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Date: 10/17/2008 10:45:00 AM
Amazing poem in the nonet form! Great job, wonderful image of the drink that warms. Nicely written!! :) ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/17/2008 5:46:00 AM
Teresita this is a wonderful example of this form - I no longer drink myself but I can certainly recall its warming affect - I was a Jack man myself - Now all I drink is coffee, water and every once in a while I'll have a glass of milk - God Bless
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Date: 10/17/2008 4:54:00 AM
Ooooh great ending!!! You began it differently and ended up with so much passion. Love, Chitra
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