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Warm Thrill, Brief Unforgettable Moment, Mario De Paz 11,19,2013

That field of wheat Gilded by sun Cherished by wind Tender received Our bodies Quivering. A warm thrill Down in my back, In my bones, While embracing her In the field of wheat. A warm thrill Is now quivering Down in my back In my bones, Thinking To that field of wheat italian version: Brivido caldo Quel campo di grano Dorato dal sole Accarezzato dal vento Morbido accolse I nostri corpi Frementi. Un brivido caldo Scese nella mia schiena, Nelle mie ossa, Mentre lei abbracciavo Nel campo di grano. Un brivido caldo Sta ora scendendo Fremente Nella mia schiena Nelle mie ossa, Pensando A quel campo di grano

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Date: 11/30/2013 8:41:00 PM
Unforgettable indeed! Well crafted with lovely imagery :)
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Mario De Paz
Date: 12/1/2013 5:41:00 AM
Thank you, Karen, for visiting and for positive comment
Date: 11/29/2013 10:29:00 PM
That is an unforgettable moment...congratulations on your win..
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Date: 11/30/2013 10:02:00 AM
Yes, it was indeed. Thanks,
Date: 11/29/2013 12:12:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: - BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT / / Nette Onclaud contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/21/2013 6:37:00 AM
to be in a moment like this is simply divine, mario... if for me, kindly add name, contest title and date of poem.. :) huggs
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Date: 9/25/2013 9:54:00 AM
love your poem Mario, and yes the Italian version, without understanding, comes across some how, very powerful...
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Mario De Paz
Date: 9/26/2013 7:03:00 AM
Thank you for commenting so positively. Sometimes my memories help to write a poem where there is something of myself inside....
Date: 9/19/2013 9:10:00 AM
A beautiful poem Mario - I wish I could read it in Italian - Italian sounds so romantic. - All the best to you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/19/2013 9:25:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise. Sometimes I feel romantic and then I write what is passing in my brain

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