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Warm Fuzzies

Warm fuzzies and butterflies Blushing smiles and starry eyes Emotional reactions that may seem overblown From a fairy tale land far, far away, far beyond the grasp of those who are fully grown But for those of us who are compelled to sigh and swoon at the sight of two lovers, holding hands and strolling by the light of the moon This...is for you This is for...the romantics Those who like to take their time For him, who knows she'll get lost in the rhythm of his heartbeat And she's assured that for her...there's no mountain he won't climb These words are meant to remind the lady that his lips do indeed taste like honey And the gentleman will recall, that her smile can make even the stormiest of days, appear sunny These verses represent.. A picnic for two atop a grassy, secluded hill feeding each other strawberries until they both have eaten way past their fill. An exchange of odes and sonnets written from his and her quill Even after the last page is shared, candied thoughts linger, still Thus sparking a poetry slam for two, reciting heart shaped rhymes at will Some still gleefully agree that even in the day and age that this is a luscious... lingering,,, kiss is... a soft...soothing... bliss is... Warm fuzzies and butterflies Blushing smiles and starry eyes... 1/28/16

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/3/2016 7:33:00 PM

Hi Dineen, i did enjoy your first poem, as i did read i felt the peace enter me. I did feel a joy i ever wish to feel. Being of a romantic nature myself this write did sing. It does give, peace, joy and most assuredly warm fuzzies. For the write itself and also the feelings it did give, this write does deserve a seven rating and i place it in my faves....Mike.

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/4/2016 6:28:00 PM

I appreciate you saying that this piece/peace did indeed give the feeling of warm fuzzies. Your kind compliments are appreciated as well, thank you much!

Tom Quigley

Date: 3/16/2016 2:36:00 PM

Great poem! "Grown up" in that sense is so unnecessary!

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/19/2016 4:58:00 AM

Thank you very much Tom. Yes, in that sense let that inner child shine.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2016 3:24:00 PM

what a wonderful first poem you posted at Soup. I really enjoyed seeing this one today, Dineen

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/19/2016 4:55:00 AM

Thank you for that, Andrea. Your support is so appreciated!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/16/2016 10:18:00 PM

Hi Dineen, I hope you are well. LINDA

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 2/21/2016 9:56:00 AM

Hi Linda, sweet of you to ask. Just been busy. I hope all is well with you also. :)

Joseph May

Date: 1/30/2016 7:51:00 PM

Beautifully romantic Dineen...Well written... A 7..Welcome to Poetry Soup!

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 1/31/2016 5:38:00 AM

Thank you very much for letting me know you think so, Joseph. I appreciate the welcome!

Skat A

Date: 1/29/2016 6:08:00 PM

Dineen, warm fuzzies and butterflies. Fascinating imagery, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Skat A
Date: 1/30/2016 1:57:00 AM

ha, then we are going to be great poetic friends. SKAT

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 1/29/2016 6:22:00 PM

Well Skat, I am pleased to meet you. It's wonderful that you found the imagery fascinating, and I am looking forward to reading your work. Thank you much for such an upbeat response, my newest poetry soup friend. I can be a bit quiet at first, but then look out! :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/29/2016 2:07:00 PM

Excellent pen Deen! Well done! A 7! And welcome to the Soup!:)) Ah and thank you so kindly for your visit to my page! Looking forward to reading more of your work here.Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:) D

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 1/29/2016 6:34:00 PM

I appreciate your kind words very much, as well as the welcome Dorian. It was my pleasure to visit your page. You have a lovely weekend as well, and God bless!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/29/2016 11:42:00 AM

Coming back here, Dineen. It would be nice to read another delight like this one. I like the entry and ending, and flow. You also have a great rhyming beat, I am aromatic and enjoyed this even more the second time. Hugs. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 1/29/2016 6:05:00 PM

Of, course Dineen, I'm especially looking forward in coming back to find a new poem. Your newest friend with a pen. Linda

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 1/29/2016 6:03:00 PM

Gee Linda, you let this steep, came back and enjoyed it even more. Thank you so much for such a positive, detailed critique. I will look into the vault for another one.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2016 7:27:00 PM

Dineen WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 1/29/2016 11:09:00 AM

Thank you for such a warm welcome Linda. I feel lucky to have found this group. Hopefully I'll do a better job at editing my poetry before posting next time, :p. And I will appreciate every piece enjoyed. Many talented writers here, thanks again my new poetic friend. :)