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Warm Autumn Days

The pink clouds move on beyond The sky a light blue color The trees polka-dot of green And rough rustic hues Dark reds, yellows, and oranges All dotted here and about Emotions are filled with sky Warm delightful feel The leaves all intermittent With the browns seeming to ground Holding the form true in awe I delve deep within I approach this paradise And give my approval stamp Clenching the leaves before me Wanting to see more I walk home with this image It’s firmly planted in mind Beauty that's surpassed by none This warm autumn day Russell Sivey

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/20/2013 2:42:00 PM

Autumn floods our eyes, mind, heart and soul with beauty that you have well described..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/20/2013 4:34:00 AM

One of my favorite season, and you painted the image beautifully Russell. Skies change so quickly in this season and you brought out the best description by far. Warm Smiles, Connie

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/20/2013 3:10:00 AM

I agree with Andrea. It is beautiful Russell.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2013 12:13:00 AM

I adore this line you wrote: Emotions are filled with sky!! How evocative!!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/19/2013 8:46:00 PM

Wow! this got painted in my mind too. Lovely poem. thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2013 5:36:00 PM

Russell, i like the way you approach this paradise, and imagery. The nice and warm feeling of autumn is nicely planted here were I'm from... thank you always~ LINDA