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I’m going to follow the birds And the monarch butterflies My suitcase is packed and ready I’m going south….. I want to lie on a lonely beach And watch the waves repeat Let my mind wander..or not I’m going south…. Touched by the morning sun Listen to the wind in the palms While my cares stay at home I’m going south…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/31/2009 1:36:00 AM
Another beauty here Barbara...I goal is to retire as a beach-bum...Tim
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Date: 10/29/2009 7:06:00 PM
Oh my, How I wish I could go for the cold weather that's coming. Very nice. Thank you for your comments on my poetry.
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Date: 10/29/2009 5:35:00 PM
really like this one Barbara, been theere done that Still here. love it I followed the ROBINS AND STAYED> THANKS IF I WASN"T HERE < YOUR POEM WOULD PUT ME HERE> Robert
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Date: 10/29/2009 5:14:00 PM
Awesome verse Barbara >> James
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Date: 10/29/2009 7:55:00 AM
Dear Barbara,Barbeeg, Beautiful Can I go with YOU LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 10/29/2009 3:27:00 AM
This is illustrious the way you described the spindrift,it sounded so placid within recitation. Such a well composed brass-hat write that will cause all of the readers to say hats off to this astonishing poet.Sincerely,Eric
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Date: 10/28/2009 3:22:00 PM
It is a brighter day for me today after reading your wonderful poetry. I wish you a wonderful day filled with love and inspiration Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/28/2009 1:10:00 PM
I would love to go south right now it starting to get cold. Great Poem
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Date: 10/28/2009 11:12:00 AM
Nice words, lovely poem. Pam.
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Date: 10/28/2009 10:58:00 AM
Lovely, I enjoy the south so much. Your work is so full of wonderful imagery and peaceful feeling... Amazing write definitely one of my favorites!w
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