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Wanna Hear A Sad Song

Sad music playin' is what I choose
Cos' I'm knee deep in a mess of blues

My baby left for the last time
And I can't seem to make it rhyme

Forever was the word I knew
He just laughed and said we're through

Pillow talk's the only talkin' we did
Say anymore well God forbid

I just heard the slammin' door
He's gone but I don't know what for

Makin' it work-I truly tried
Now I see he only lied

So crank it up and I'll sing along
To some lonesome bluesey song

Lost somewhere I go alone
That bird of love has swiftly flown

Friends I promise to get this all out of my system...these poems about heartbreak will end

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  1. Date: 10/23/2010 5:34:00 AM
    Catching up on your wrk on this Sat. morning... and always a joy to read my dear...Love Michael

  1. Date: 10/18/2010 9:48:00 AM
    this was a beautiful poem, artfully penned. heartbreak can bring out beautiful things in us, sorrow is as beautiful at joy, it keeps us real and loving and hoping. just let it out though :) we soup members support you! great poem again and thanks for the comments --Madison

  1. Date: 10/18/2010 1:48:00 AM
    Some beautiful words come with heartache Deb.....Though the price is extremely high....I could feel your words.....Larry

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 10:12:00 PM
    So poignant yet intricately lovely... cheerios now, deb warmest, nette