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Wandering a Mountain

Up in a mountain top, up very high Where the rocks give up with a gentle sigh Moss grows on their surface where the stream flows The ground’s steep and you’re higher than you know The trees are spread out and look very white But the ones near the bottom carry height Air breathes thin and is often hard to find But it’s so pure you really don’t mind The stream is quite cold, like the mountain top Whole mountain is old, beauty is non-stop The place sings a song, a rhyming collage It supplies rare flowers for a corsage I wander along looking for some peace The mountain provides hope with sweet release
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/17/2012 11:10:00 AM
Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading..This one is somewhat different from your usualy work...Thanks for stopping by..Yes my work was about a grandson...He is a grown man though but still a child sometimes..Sara
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Date: 12/17/2012 11:07:00 AM
Hello Russell, really enjoyed this work this morning, a lot of great imagery. Rollo
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