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Babe when you hold me, this is our song - One, two, three, one, two, three; waltz me along. Dip me and sway me. I love what you do; I am in Heaven when I’m with you! Written June 12, 2015 for the "Shall We Waltz?" Poetry Contest of Kim Merryman

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Date: 6/18/2015 8:43:00 PM
Well done for the contest, yet from my point of view, it was a 1.
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Date: 6/18/2015 3:12:00 PM
wonderful write a 7 hugs eve
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Date: 6/18/2015 1:55:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/18/2015 12:58:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your win. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 6/18/2015 12:04:00 PM
So pleased to be back with congratulations, Andrea; also glad to be standing next to you on the podium:) // paul
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Date: 6/18/2015 11:48:00 AM
I can feel the music in your waltz, makes me want to move my feet! Nicely done! :)
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Date: 6/17/2015 11:43:00 PM
Andrea I love this waltz of two. Seems like we both had dancing hearts in mind. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/17/2015 11:20:00 PM
This is beautiful. Congratulations on your win:) Alexis
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Date: 6/17/2015 9:46:00 PM
You have a great knack for making me want to dance to your words.
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Date: 6/17/2015 8:33:00 PM
Makes me want to dance with that certain someone. Congrats! BG
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Date: 6/17/2015 5:59:00 PM
Andrea, congrats on taking 2nd place in my contest! I'm a sucker for romance and I like how you incorporated the dance movements into your poem! Well done! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/17/2015 5:49:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Andrea
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Date: 6/17/2015 5:01:00 PM
very cute and loving poem, good luck on the contest ... enjoyed:)... luv, p.d.
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Date: 6/16/2015 5:34:00 PM
unique Andrea gl in contest hugs
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Date: 6/14/2015 9:51:00 PM
I would love to see the "Dip me" routine!! You are a beautiful dancer and your partner is blessed to have you! 7 big hugs.
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Date: 6/14/2015 3:44:00 PM
Andrea, beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my haiku poem
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Date: 6/14/2015 12:24:00 PM
Wonderful romantic write Andrea...
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Date: 6/14/2015 11:20:00 AM
What a wonderful dance you have created. This is totally charming. Love, daver
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Date: 6/14/2015 9:23:00 AM
I'm caught up in the music...this is wonderfully done! A sure winner!
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Date: 6/14/2015 8:53:00 AM
You are quite the dancer Andrea! Good luck in the contest. The group poem is now finished if you would like to check it out.
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Date: 6/14/2015 8:19:00 AM
I agree with Ian's comment Andrea :-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/14/2015 7:06:00 AM
Beautiful poem and rhythm, Thanks for your kind comments and support on my song/poem ill sing to my king, I'm no good with instruments but I'm singing it plain on you tube, I have got a channel and got 4songs on now, not best picture as had to upload from a mobile phone but its a start and can upgrade when time is tight
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Date: 6/14/2015 5:27:00 AM
This is a lovely waltz that you dance, Andrea!! Unfortunately I was never good at waltzing....can we have a slow dance instead?!!:) // paul
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Date: 6/14/2015 5:15:00 AM
Lovely, Andrea....I'm with Ian on this one....Perhaps we just have sensual minds. It does seem like there is more promised than a dance. Lovely! Hugs
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Date: 6/14/2015 3:25:00 AM
so playful and endearing, andie... anyone would love to waltz with you.. SOUPIE!
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