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Walls Make Bad Neighbours

Walls Make Bad Neighbours ‘All in all we are just bricks in the wall’ deconstructed by Pink Floyd when they called for a truly kind compassionate reflective society and ~ Education ~ Of John Lennon we may think that he was ‘a dreamer but not the only one’ to 'give peace a chance' while discounting violent revolution in ~ Resistance ~ Wolf Biermann sees his father’s grave every time smoke ascends from some industrious chimneys of so many concentrated crimes against ~ Humanity ~ ‘What will the neighbours say’ goes to my parent’s generation when they continued to live the secret of why they colluded with fascism and ~ Genocide ~ Karl Marx clearly saw the alienation of humanity and that ‘knowledge without action’ was a false shallow unfinished philosophy and empty ~ Promise ~ The Scorpions called for ‘winds of change’ but are they a-changing here and today while most of us sit on fat gluttonous bums or size zero buttocks of ~ Delusion ~ The fake golden staircase leads from Zeppelin to Zeppelin with hot air between the sheets of so called progress on eves wasted droned into ~ Oblivion ~ Nena’s ‘red balloons’ popped out of nowhere but into nothing’s blip of conscience forsaken Nirvana and waning sound bites of candles extinguished by ~ Destruction ~ If we want to surpass the walls of our prisons we might want to consider removing that one brick at a time that barricades and constricts our quest for ~ Liberation ~ The freedom of justice and the freedom from the walls in our minds as our children will lay cries of despair at our door with only us to blame in ~ Shame ~ We are the guardians of posterity but which side of the fence are we sitting on in our greed racism intolerance xenophobia and egotistic ~ Denial ~ When we sow winds we will reap storms and the flood gates will open yet transformation makes better neighbours and better companions than ~ Walls ~ 15th November 2016 ‘

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Date: 8/14/2021 2:13:00 PM
WoW--you summed up humanity pretty perfectly! And will we ever change--that's the question. Great poem!
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Date: 7/8/2019 1:49:00 PM
holykomoly...wowza...you sure you ain't on coffee or something...nice write
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Date: 5/31/2019 9:22:00 AM
Brilliant writing, my friend. Excellent structure, which compliments the intent of your piece. Five-star poem, IMO!
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Date: 5/31/2019 6:23:00 AM
This is poem full of philosophy. Great. Keep on think in such novel ways humanity will get a lot from you.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/9/2019 5:00:00 AM
Only reading this now. Thank you for your comment and praise. I might be 'preaching' to the converted, but (I worked as a physician) first do no harm. Kind wishes to you, Kai
Date: 5/31/2019 5:43:00 AM
I like this poem. maybe the poem likes me. very cool. feel free to see/comment on mine on poetrysoup. sincerely, Daniel schack.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/31/2019 11:14:00 AM
Good fit then. Thank you. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 5/30/2019 12:06:00 PM
I am very impressed with this one, my friend!!! Excellent composition... cheers, Happy Jack!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/31/2019 11:12:00 AM
Thank you Jack. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 10/1/2017 5:04:00 PM
WoW ! Love it :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/31/2019 11:11:00 AM
Thank you Debbie. I appreciate that. Kind wishes, Kai
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/31/2019 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Debbie. I appreciate that. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 11/15/2016 8:45:00 AM
Very deep and profound. Much to reflect on. Great writing, Kai. Lainey
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/15/2016 8:56:00 AM
Thank you Elaine. I appreciate that. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 11/15/2016 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Probir. Just trying to make some sense of the world...
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Date: 11/15/2016 5:37:00 AM
Very enlightening ... Read with interest and joy ...
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