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Walls Infatuation Built

Early on, I called your look lust. You named it love, one I should trust. Startled, my feelings then crushed A blunt voiced decline of love for us. Your face folded, alarmed, nonplussed, Before tenderly probing me to discuss Why love turned my demeanor to rust. So I shared, I gave and I conveyed If love is real it need not persuade For true love grows, it does not fade – Not according to plans my heart made. Again, you said love and I said date, Do not rush for love gladly waits, While infatuation will just deflate. We may have but fleeting gifts to share To nurture our lives overall core welfare. Please, I continued, just give it air, Do not rush to construct a nightmare Built of walls that leak despair. Still you insisted I be love ensnared. Now we live maimed inside walls of warfare That I stupidly allowed despite my scare. ... CayCay Jennings October 28, 2016

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Date: 10/29/2016 8:40:00 PM
I can sure relate to this poem CayCay. It is best to move on from that kind of immaturity. Sorry this did not make the list but it was a short one. Love, Connie ; )
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Date: 10/29/2016 6:18:00 PM
Ooohoohoo! I think we have all been there and done that. Very well expressed with good emotion. A seven from me. God Bless and thanks for the kind words and sharing of my "Season of the Witch". My next two poems are a story for Halloween. Please take a peek for me. JB
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Date: 10/29/2016 5:26:00 PM
Reads like winning material for the contest..Way to go..Sometimes love is not meant to be so it seems..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate your presence at my page..Sara
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Date: 10/29/2016 4:20:00 PM
I've lived your poetry, I think I can safely assume many have, hits within the heart and soul of regretful relationships. These walls take forever to disassemble.
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Date: 10/29/2016 11:36:00 AM
Caycay, wonderfully penned with great rhyming too, oh yes it is easy to get trapped in a dead end love until one has the strength to break down the wall
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Date: 10/29/2016 8:03:00 AM
Hi CayCay, I know the feeling of rushing down a road that leads to nowhere and all of the unintentional lies you tell yourself to justify your lack of judgement.
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Date: 10/29/2016 5:45:00 AM
It is so easy to get oneself trapped in a stagnate relationship. Unfortunately I can relate to this one, CayCay. Good luck:)
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Date: 10/29/2016 3:34:00 AM
This is the mark of a true artist in that they improve on their work.it is Fantastic. Btw. Forgive me but I did dedicate my last one to you. Please. Go read Who She is
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