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Walls

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Walls

White walls don’t speak, Black
Walls always cry, Yellow walls
Laugh and speak always

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  1. Date: 7/17/2009 11:42:00 AM
    Terriific write Ciara>>James

  1. Date: 7/17/2009 2:00:00 AM
    I'm not usually enamoured with western haiku because I find it too pretentious as if the poets is saying 'look how clever I am, reducing worlds to 16 syllables!' However this is genuinely a great work. The theme doesn't follow any laid out rules for haiku but I feel that you have succeeded in creating a work that maintains the spirit of the form. A brilliant poem!

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 4:22:00 AM
    yes, I play w/color in my work, Too! love it! great spoken! too!! your friend, jim