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Walking To School

A walk to school out of the backdoor, through the homemade back gate, through a narrow alley, Cars parked on the curb, guarded by paraffin lamps, no garages, no parking area, Walking down my road, past the bully's house, all is very, very quiet, careful Then the front door opens, a big kid comes running and chases me down the road. Near the end of my street was a large piece of wasteland, called "the logs" Huge logs cut down hundreds of years ago, grey, split, tall trees chopped down, Stinging nettles in large clumps, cars abandoned, a play ground for children, Into a road full of bungalows, the posh side, people looking through curtains. About a mile down this road, there was more wasteland, with a muddy shortcut, Shoes covered in mud, trying to clean them with an old bit of paper, no good, Out of the wooded shortcut, past the entrance of a railway, through a tunnel, On the other side, up steps was a sweet shop, looked through window, no money. Past the bank on to a main road, told many times to look left and right, careful, Walking up another street, then a short cut through, an old mansion falling apart, Down the coke covered road, into a road where huge flats were being built, ugly flats. The into my school play ground, seeing class mates, queuing up to go into the school.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/1/2013 1:15:00 PM
This writing makes me feel as though I'm there walking right down those places. Very vivid. I hope you have nothing but beautiful views now and clean shoes haha. Really nice writing
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