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Walking On the Stars

WALKING ON THE STARS Waves break white Far out behind the tide line. The summer wind, moves the light night clouds As the stars slide down to touch the trawler lights. And the sky A dark blue tent all around Is pegged to the sea. Whisper wind Moves through dry sand grass Soft on bare skin Like fine cotton sheets. All around the sky, the sea And the sand a mirror lake, reflects the stars Shining phosphorous in the dark. Our footprints deep on the sky We are walking on the stars. Jenny Magrath Fraser Island 1988

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/15/2012 7:33:00 PM
Good Write
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Date: 10/14/2012 8:01:00 PM
nicely written....enjoyed
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:57:00 PM
You gilded the dark ocean with a phosphorescent sheen. Love how you spun the natural images with a cerebral charm. An aesthetically-endearing scene!
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:25:00 PM
For some reason an email from poetry soup meant for you and your poem came to me so I am answering so that you will see the other answer also. This is truly a beautiful poem. I am glad I was led to it. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:17:00 PM
beautiful....made me want to be near the ocean...the images came to life!
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:17:00 PM
beautiful....made me want to be near the ocean...the images came to life!
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