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walking in the rain

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walking in the rain

She hears the chug a chug of the moving bus
Watches as the raindrops fall easy onto glass
Such a long despair she sprouts out of the bus
Her heart is tight eyes the color of blown glass
from the deepest depths a song sings
lamenting in a circle of one soul l
in the pain of reality a bell sings
pulling on the cords ding ding from the soul

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  1. Date: 10/6/2013 1:03:00 PM
    This I commented as well on Mystic Rose , yet noticing you both wrote , a beautiful write Liam & mystic. one of my Favs, Yvette now shanity rain , new pen name .