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Walking In My Shoes

My name has spread round the neighborhood anytime I slip and commit the slightest miscue. The best news caption to all ears is when the topic centers on my issue. Their deadly words causing much pain as they eat up every tissue. Refusing me all opportunity to redeem myself as all I end up doing is argue. Catching Rebecca red handed, Oh my best friend, even you! knowing how she stabs me at the back despite being attached to her like a glue condemns me beyond redemption and leaves me totally in black and blue. These stories are far from being true and their effects on me make me dysfunctional like a statue When considering the root of this problem I blame myself for giving them the avenue. Already knowing in and out of me, they coin their versions and heavily miscontrue. But this has got to stop! Swallowing this mess, is long overdue. The satisfaction and amusement, they enjoy and accrue is what I must face and ensure they discontinue. No one can be my saviour only but I, can come to my own rescue. I now leave my shell, facing squarely, those who are dedicated to my pursue. Goodness me! The result seems quite easy as they all hide to my subdue. Then I realize, I still have some virtue. Therefore, no one should dare treat me in disvalue until you start walking in my shoe

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Date: 2/14/2014 10:44:00 AM
Unless you walk that mile........... No one has the power to be judge and jury over another. You write well.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/14/2014 12:19:00 PM
Thanks a lot Vince
Date: 6/6/2013 6:01:00 AM
You are so right. We kind of get what we expect. Love your writing and it rings so true. ~ Debbie K.
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/7/2013 2:30:00 AM
Thanks Debbie
Date: 4/22/2013 11:07:00 AM
Clarity of purpose, and thought... plus written as one truly gifted. Keep writting.
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/23/2013 10:25:00 AM
Thanks a lot Carol...
Date: 4/15/2013 7:01:00 AM
This is very insightful Funom. You make a very good point. It is very true and something I have said in one of my poems "the only way you can know what a person goes through in their life is to walk in their shoes." This is so true. Well done x
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Date: 4/15/2013 4:38:00 PM
thanks alot pam woolford
Date: 4/12/2013 5:29:00 PM
No one knows a person better than themselves. Before someone judges another they should take a long look in the mirror. Your message was plain and I couldn't agree more. Nice write and thanks for your visit.Terry
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Date: 4/13/2013 1:27:00 PM
Thanks a lot Terry Burns
Date: 3/31/2013 11:10:00 PM
Hi Funom, I like this piece; it is well written and resonates a powerful story.Good Job!
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/1/2013 10:14:00 AM
Thanks a lot Christine
Date: 3/28/2013 6:01:00 AM
Great insight and wisdom shown here, Funom...'Only but I, can come to my own rescue' sums it all up very well...also I like the multiple 'ue' rhymes throughout - Tim
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/28/2013 9:25:00 AM
thanks a lot Tim... I really do appreciate it.
Date: 3/25/2013 7:12:00 AM
It seems life is an endless battle in one way or the other, perhaps so that when death comes we are ready to rest? Thanks so much for your input on my writes. Light & Love
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/25/2013 8:04:00 AM
thanks a lot Debbie
Date: 3/24/2013 11:07:00 PM
This is an literary feet of art. Justly put Nd everything felt. Well done brotha well done
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/25/2013 8:04:00 AM
thanks a lot eddie
Date: 3/24/2013 10:23:00 PM
Hh4h
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Date: 3/25/2013 8:03:00 AM
dunno wat that means, but anyway, thanks
Date: 3/24/2013 5:57:00 PM
Reading your poem and commenting ended up as a new poem for me. You have been my muse today. Thanks so very much.
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/25/2013 8:03:00 AM
thanks a lot Richard
Date: 3/24/2013 6:12:00 AM
Very nice poem here !Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your comments at my poems.
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/24/2013 6:17:00 AM
thanks a lot Kash Poet
Date: 3/23/2013 7:59:00 PM
They sound like tight shoes. I really liked your poem, lots to ponder here. Well done!
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Date: 3/24/2013 6:08:00 AM
Thanks a lot Richard
Date: 3/23/2013 7:20:00 PM
Hi, Funom. You must be new here. I have not seen you before. WElcome to PoetrySoup! To walk in another's shoes is something i wish we all were able to do.
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/24/2013 6:09:00 AM
Not really, I have been here since 2011 and as well active... So, I wouldn't say I am new. Thanks for your comment.
Date: 3/23/2013 6:35:00 PM
Hi Funom! Thanks for stopping by....nice work! Jimbo
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Date: 3/24/2013 6:09:00 AM
Thanks Jimbo
Date: 3/23/2013 5:17:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..The work reads as though someone is bullying you..I hope that this is not true..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/23/2013 5:20:00 PM
Thanks a lot sara... Actually its just a poem
Date: 3/23/2013 4:18:00 PM
the boots that ARE we walk in , have a different point of view, the answer is in the telling, when a history lessons due... good one mate
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/23/2013 5:21:00 PM
Thanks a lot Don Johnson
Date: 3/23/2013 3:30:00 PM
Funom, this is a well thought-out piece. The construction is "virtuous", the message, the image- vivid! And the result- awesome!
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/23/2013 5:26:00 PM
thanks a lot Ndaba
Date: 3/23/2013 12:34:00 PM
Not an easy feat (no pun intended) rhyming all those words with shoe. Here's where I take my cue and say "Very nice to meet you "Fu." Seriously though, a very thought provoking poem - well done. Cheers, Terry
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/23/2013 5:29:00 PM
thanks alot Terrell, I need not ask 'who' Ur words can never be overdue as it is nice meeting you, too!
Date: 3/23/2013 11:55:00 AM
excellent write! so true and honest y/f/a cortney
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/23/2013 11:57:00 AM
thanks a lot Cortney
Date: 3/23/2013 11:23:00 AM
"No one can be my saviour only but I, can come to my own rescue",so true , and well written Funom - - Have a great weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/23/2013 11:53:00 AM
Thanks a lot Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2013 9:09:00 AM
Good morning.....thanks for the great words. I think it would make a great anti bullying post. Would love to share it with my friends...... But........alas, legalities, legalities. Thanks for sharing these words of written wisdom Scott
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/23/2013 10:39:00 AM
I'm grateful Scott. Feel very free to share it with ur friends anytime u want to.

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