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Walking Alone

~ Taking a breath beneath heaven’s glowing embers Calling the moon as it passes in the night Feeling a breeze through the branches softly whisper Dreaming of you under stardust shimmered light Kicking a stone till it tumbles past the forest Singing our song to the echoes that I hear Counting the stars when I notice one is falling Walking alone making wishes you were here ~

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/18/2016 12:39:00 AM

I can feel the longing in this poem..that wanton feeling..The last four lines..WoWzer..Cant get any better..Inspiring indeed.

Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2016 6:27:00 AM

Thanks so much Charmaine. I am happy you liked this and the wishing on a star lines.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/17/2016 9:04:00 PM

This one is great ! Put together so nicely! :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2016 6:27:00 AM

Thanks you Heidi for your always kind words

Tim Smith

Date: 10/17/2016 8:44:00 PM

Beautiful style here Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2016 6:27:00 AM

Thanks so very much Tim. Means a lot coming from you

Paloma P

Date: 10/17/2016 7:02:00 PM

New poetic take on wish upon a star, as always the imagery is lovely Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2016 6:26:00 AM

Thanks so very much again Paloma for your always kindness

Phil Capitano

Date: 10/17/2016 6:58:00 PM

I really like this a lot, Chris, and it reminds me of one of mine ~ Under The Dome. This is what a seven looks like.

Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2016 6:26:00 AM

Thanks so very much Phil, I will check yours out.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/17/2016 6:12:00 PM

Yes Chris a lot of imagery here,with the feeling of being alone. This is a very good poem I felt myself as being part of your poem.Nice meeting you Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2016 6:26:00 AM

Thanks you so very much Darlene, I am happy this one touched you

Celine Rose Mariotti

Date: 10/17/2016 5:57:00 PM

Dear Chris, A lot of beautiful imagery here. And the feeling of being alone and thinking of someone who is special to you. Very well written. Celine Rose Mariotti

Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2016 5:59:00 PM

Thank you so very much Celine for your kind words for me this evening. I truly appreciate your visit to my poetry and I am thrilled you liked it.