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Come take a walk with me let us stroll the savannah I want to show you the beauty to introduce you to East Africa A land seeped in dark history and mysteries where once the Tembo roamed in their thousands mighty animals who feared no-one not even lions capable of uprooting a tree yet also tender to young Most Majestic king of beasts lays sunbathing his job is protection and to father strong cubs replete from a gnu feast he dally's the day away at dusk he will, with his brother do a patrol There are hidden water holes if one knows where here the birds swoop in, parrots and love birds weavers and horn bills, egrets and fishing eagles all flock to drink and then if safe a lovely bath Thorn acacias adorn this lush land their tops flat a treat for the long neck reticulated giraffe they nibble away and seem to avoid the thorns with a-plume then gracefully bending down to snack on buffalo grass Vast changes in landscape, deep rift valleys amidst the hills filled with peace and grace lakes that startle as so bright they sparkle once teeming with fish now sadly rather depleted Villages of mud and straw huts, naked children women with just a skirt, many men in throngs cauldron in the centre where all share the cooking a communal building where the young men sleep Scrub trees line the deep red soil with clumps of dry grass, little cover here for hunter the herds on high alert ready to take to heel and flee the slightest movement enough to spook them Wondrous baobab trees with root like branches a favourite place for natives to stash food the landscape is continuously changing, some things no more animals hunted to verge of extinction for what good? The herds of Tembo once numbering up to 300 per herd with ancient leaders who had the knowledge to survive the harshest of the droughts that can plague this land Africa the continent of fire, of spices, filled with flora This continent of dark mystery holds me spell bound it hosts a vast treasure of so many things all precious from the smallest to the largest, from stones come gems how can I convince you that here you must visit and soon For here in this land are so many stories to delight, to inspire and even to soothe, and some that will enrage the gentle poet heart. And inspired by the vast array here on display your poets soul will be totally inspired written 01/12/2014 by Shadow Hamilton motif:epic contest: Impress me 1V

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Date: 2/19/2014 10:45:00 PM
I am very inspired by this epic write! The descriptive imagery put me right in the middle of the African plains. A terrific poem, Shadow! Congratulations on your win, as well! Hugs :)
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Date: 2/14/2014 10:02:00 AM
Truly an epic write! Congrats shadow on a great win and for this beautiful composition! hugs..
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Date: 2/14/2014 10:28:00 AM
Gautami ty very much hugs
Date: 2/13/2014 4:58:00 AM
Big congrats to you on your fine win in the contest, Shadow!
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Date: 2/14/2014 10:27:00 AM
ty so much AO hugs
Date: 2/13/2014 3:37:00 AM
Congrats on win with this great work Shadow.
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Date: 2/14/2014 10:27:00 AM
hi Kayods ty East Africa holds a special place in my heart I had such a wonderful 10 years living out there hugs
Date: 2/12/2014 11:42:00 AM
Such a splendid write here Shadow warm wishes on the high spot win..'
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Date: 2/12/2014 4:07:00 PM
ty so much Joe hugs
Date: 2/12/2014 9:10:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Shadow
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Date: 2/12/2014 4:07:00 PM
ty Joseph hugs
Date: 2/12/2014 9:09:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats on the win, shadow
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Date: 2/12/2014 4:06:00 PM
ty Ram hugs
Date: 2/12/2014 3:19:00 AM
- Another contest sponsored by: Giorgio V. - "Impress me IV" - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM,SHADOW - ENJOYABLE TO READ YOURS AND A PLEASURE TO PARTICIPATE :))) - Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/12/2014 4:34:00 AM
ty so much Anne Lise hugs
Date: 2/11/2014 8:11:00 PM
Shadow, this is a beautiful descriptive poem. I enjoyed the reading. Verlena and congratulation on the win....
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Date: 2/12/2014 4:35:00 AM
hi Verlena and ty very much hugs
Date: 1/14/2014 2:05:00 AM
Descriptive indeed but presented very nicely. New information are there for me. Loved always, my friend, bl
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Date: 1/14/2014 6:35:00 AM
Hi BL and ty dear Shadow x smile
Date: 1/13/2014 11:05:00 AM
So descriptive, so beautifully written... kudos my dear Shadow! Warm hugs, Jack xoxox
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Date: 1/14/2014 6:34:00 AM
hi Jack belated happy new year ty so much Shadow x smile
Date: 1/13/2014 7:19:00 AM
Dear Shadow, just stopped by to say hi and to read this vivid inspiring write. Enjoyed it my friend. Baobab trees...it would be interesting to learn more about that.
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Date: 1/14/2014 6:33:00 AM
hi dearest MM so nice to see you I am so happy you enjoyed this Look for a picture on line they are fascinating to see Shadow x smile
Date: 1/12/2014 3:14:00 PM
my, what a detailed flowing essay on a land of such beauty, shadow... this is greeat!.. huggs
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Date: 1/12/2014 4:00:00 PM
hi Nette Africa is beautiful ty for reading Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/12/2014 2:40:00 PM
Enjoyed reading some more about Africa..A vast land which is the home to so many species...I wonder if the dry climate could be helped to be better with more water so that the animals would have their needs met..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your presence there encourages me..Sara
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Date: 1/12/2014 3:10:00 PM
difficult Sara because of the season changes. In the wet vast amounts of water cover the land turning it to swamp then as the dry comes it shrinks back to small pools and puddles.Also sadly people do not bother about the animals it is all self. I was appalled to watch a documentary on water aid where they fenced off the water moaned when desperate elephants broke it What the Hell!!! they have as much right to water build two one for animals then all are happy grrr ty for reading Shadow x smile hug

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