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waking on a naughty day

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waking on a naughty day

She no longer sedate,
Yet worn and late
And toe hurts 
For she was close hearth; on sofa
so spine ache.

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  1. Date: 4/28/2011 3:49:00 PM
    uhhhh, now my head ache.

  1. Date: 12/16/2010 10:17:00 AM
    sorry, guys, don't be any serious concerning any comment below this one. it was my naughty friend. i never knew , but i've placed a punishment by rating it 1. hope that's acceptable?

  1. Date: 12/13/2010 2:36:00 AM

  1. Date: 12/11/2010 5:41:00 PM
    haha, sounds like it was one back breaking night she woke up from! LUv,

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 6:47:00 AM
    This is excellent,Nebeolisa.I enjoyed it

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 4:49:00 AM
    I sent you Soupmail

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 11:41:00 AM
    May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Nebeolisa. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 8:44:00 AM
    hmmm. interesting and a tad naughty.