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Waiting To Be Strewn

Below cool cotton rippled sky pale Barren limbs hang so helpless in the mild gale Sunlight dances before it sleeps Early winter’s calling for all to keep Afternoon’s beams strike the trees They look like icicles twinkling in the breeze Mute brown colors surrounds the landscape Parched and dry soil twists up in a tunnel shape All that was full of life has now passed Tarnished and waiting for snow to blanket and contrast Pieces of debris waving in the brushwood As the first flakes fall on all where it stood And shall be graced with beauty in time With the pings of mother natures frozen white chime

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/12/2008 9:43:00 AM
Great images and so wonderfully visual. Very well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 12/7/2008 2:48:00 AM
Fantastic visual dear, Laura. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Date: 12/6/2008 3:48:00 AM
A very visual sonnet Laura, lovely, love, Kristin
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Date: 12/6/2008 12:51:00 AM
Beautiful imagery here Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 12/5/2008 11:32:00 PM
Laura this is a wonderful winter poem and just an excellent Sonnet - Love the concluding lines - God Bless you hon, MJ
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Date: 12/5/2008 9:17:00 PM
Not what I expected from the title...oh, well - just the dark side of my humor kicking in. Actually, I was very impressed by this write...then again, I'm a sucker for a good sonnet - however, this is a GREAT SONNET - each stanza kicks ass...(can I say that)? Well...I just did...excellent rhyme, tight meter, beautiful imagery. Loved this, Laura...one of your best! Wishing you and your family Happy Holidays! Peace and hugs, J.
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Date: 12/5/2008 4:29:00 PM
Dear Laura, What a beautiful Winter Sonnet I Enjoy reading YOU I LOVE the Rhyme YOU are an Inspiration YOUR Humble Protege...HG Thank-YOU for YOUR comment on HG My WIFE Died in 1971 but YOU are right Time does Heal For TIME is ETERNAL ALWAYS...HG
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