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Everything around me is still The soft lights ward off the cold My worried heart is unsettled Every minute makes me old Time seems to drag on and on Not sure I can take much more I’m waiting for my angel to walk in through that door There is nothing to do but wait, so I wonder about her day but what’s taking her so long? Did she somehow lose her way? I think about my visit My first time to see her place In my glimpse into her life, a weariness I can trace She flew away to this isle to try out her angel wings, and in following her dreams she untied the home spun strings “Our children are not our own.” Oh, great Gibran*, can’t you see? My precious 18 year old, Will always belong to me! Oh yes, she may live elsewhere Have a family of her own, but she’s my little baby and in my eyes she hasn't grown I wait and wait and wait Please, God, let her be alright! I look out of the window at the blackness of the night I think of all those mothers who wait for their children dear, whose tired and aching arms long to hold their loved ones near The wait for them is fruitless Its end is a tragic woe, for death holds back their loved ones The "Wait of Pain" will not go My heart shares in their sorrow My soul weeps for their plight For though my daughter is late She’ll be coming home tonight! For Waiting Contest by James Rogers September 9, 2015 *Khalil Gibran was a Lebanese-American artist, poet, and writer of the New York Pen League. There recent move, The Prophet, was about him.

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Date: 9/9/2015 9:51:00 AM
This is so beautiful, Eileen. Your daughter is so lucky to have such a talented and loving mother who is capable of such empathy. Straight to my faves, my friend!
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Date: 9/8/2015 6:06:00 PM
A touching heartfelt poem based on reality. Those virtual "home spun strings" will never snap...not from the mother's side, surely! Fathers may be more accepting, but they have strong feelings, too. You will not wait in vain:) hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/8/2015 7:19:00 PM
It happened two years ago while in Cyprus, Paul. Now she is in Hungary and thankfully, my husband says it is a safe place where she is staying. Yes, my husband is a wonderful father. I'm very proud of him for the way he cares for Shereen. They have a close bond. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 9/8/2015 7:41:00 AM
As we see them thrive it somehow makes it easier. But each time we see them and then they go back to their lives we feel that tinge of sadness. You expressed waiting eloquently.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/8/2015 7:20:00 PM
Yes...Yes...you captured it exactly, Richard. You know what it is like. Hugs
Date: 9/8/2015 5:22:00 AM
How dare you mock the great "Kahlil"...just being the jocular one Eileen, This was a very poignant write...I so dislike the thought of my child leaving home...yet the inevitable does happen. Great write... I was suggested to visit your writes by some of your friends here on the Soup; Andrea D. and Richard Lamoureux. I certainly am pleased with their suggestion Eileen! ..Ok..enyore arcane...mi
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/9/2015 12:43:00 AM
:) Glad to know you are only joking, MN....Yes, it's hard when the do, but they are God's gifts to us to keep for a time...These poets suggest my name to you because I write of romance and passion best. I hope you enjoy my work.
Date: 9/8/2015 4:44:00 AM
Only a mother who loves her child as much could ever understand, the pain, the agony and missing of her child. The poem a monumental symphony of feelings, dear Eileen! A seven. May God bless her! Did Gibran had children of his own?
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/9/2015 3:11:00 AM
Thank you, my dear poet. As to Gibran, I don't think he ever married. I read up on him. Thanks for the lovely post. You always bring a smile. Hugs

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