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Waiting For Her To Come Home

Everything around me is still The soft lights ward off the cold My worried heart is unsettled Every minute is making me old Time seems to drag on and on Not sure I can take much more I’m waiting for my angel To walk in through the door There is nothing to do but wait So I wonder about her day But what’s taking her so long? Did she somehow lose her way? I think about my visit My first time to see her place In my glimpse into her life, A touch of tiredness I trace She flew away to this isle To try out her angel wings And in following her dreams She untied our heart’s strings “Our children are not our own” Oh, great Gibran, can’t you see? My precious 18 year old Will always belong to me Oh yes…she will live elsewhere Have a family of her own But she’s my little baby In my heart she hasn't grown I wait and I wait and I wait Please God, let her be alright I look out of the window At the blackness of the night I think of all those mothers Who wait for their children dear Whose arms are tired and aching To hold their loved ones near My heart shares their sorrow My soul weeps for their plight For though my daughter is late I know she’s coming home tonight! Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/9/2013 3:01:00 PM
I can relate wit a son at university you alway worry somewhat. Glad to see you didn't stay away long.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/10/2013 6:31:00 AM
Good to hear from you, Richard! Yes, I'm back! :)
Date: 2/9/2013 6:46:00 AM
READ POEM BACKWARDS I like how your poem still sound good when its read backwards. Your same meaning is getting across. I like the dept and tender touch.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/9/2013 10:28:00 AM
I'm very touched that you read and commented on my poem! Thanks! Hugs!
Date: 2/8/2013 9:27:00 PM
This is so beatiful
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/9/2013 10:27:00 AM
Thanks, Jay! Hugs!
Date: 2/8/2013 2:23:00 PM
i think all parents can relate to this poem and the beautiful way you've expressed that combination of fear, dread and a tiny bit of guilt for feeling those things. i don't think we ever lose those feelings...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/9/2013 10:27:00 AM
Thanks, my sweet Ilene. How I value your opinion! Hugs!
Date: 2/8/2013 12:35:00 PM
Excellelt!
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Date: 2/8/2013 12:35:00 PM
Dearest, agape mou, that is a fantastic poem: Tender, human, loving, motherly! I have enjoyed every verse of it and since I have been through that I felt more Its intensity and its beauty. Soy dino epta! Thank you!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/9/2013 10:26:00 AM
Efxaristo, my dear. So kind of you. I'm honored that a poet of your caliber has given me this rank!!! Me Agapi!
Date: 2/8/2013 10:52:00 AM
Been there - done that ...... one concern time ...... and time goes so slowly when waiting. - Have had many such hours - most often it goes well - remember back when you were 18 years ...... - A concerned mother was waiting for you too. - Have a lovely weekend,Eileen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/8/2013 6:45:00 AM
I love your morning write too and such an important lesson you give. All parents go through this! I have so many writes of my son. Light & Love [did you know if you put son Debbie Guzzi in the search engine on top of the page it will pull up all my writes of my son! It works like this for anyones writes!]
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/8/2013 6:50:00 AM
WOW! Another good lesson to learn! Thanks, my dear! :) Hugs!
Date: 2/8/2013 6:42:00 AM
you are 1 smarty pants re: my morning haiku...just a wee bit of info for you the [kiru / cutting word is porridge] it announces the leap in thought to part 2! The actual mental leap is BETWEEN the lines 2 & 3 and in the readers HEAD!!! ahhhhhhh YES! Yes it is an analogy! Metaphor and simile are not used in haiku except...IF you can IMPLY them. My haiku remains OBJECTIVE. So happy you got it!Light & Love a dusting of sugar coats the bowl of porridge -- morning snow
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/8/2013 6:45:00 AM
Thanks for the explanation, Debbie! :)

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