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Waiting - Song Lyric Contest

Loved you from afar Since i was just a child Tried to get closer once Maybe I was just too wild Maybe I was just too wild In my teenage years i lost you Too many other things to do You were there always watching Waiting for me to return to you Waiting for me to return to you I am getting older now A heavy road I walk alone Lost many friends and family Hear you calling me home Hear you calling me home Thank you for waiting Always being by my side Helping me at sad times Now safe in your arms I lie Now safe in your arms  I lie

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Date: 10/15/2013 3:36:00 AM
Seren, my dear Seren -- This could well be my theme song. You have magnificently traced the path of this prodigal as he returns to Him from whom he fled. Bless you, sweetheart.... Jake
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/16/2013 9:59:00 AM
Jake, thank you I will happily give you this poem/song. Would love to hear it set to music. Glad you liked it.....Seren
Date: 10/10/2013 8:37:00 AM
amazing deep feelings here I love this Seren well done Shadow x smile
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/10/2013 11:32:00 AM
Thank you Shadow....Seren
Date: 10/3/2013 5:46:00 AM
This is a masterful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and enlightening poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, such a grand poem, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/3/2013 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Russell havent written a sonnet before i dont think... never sure whether I am doing things right....Seren

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