Waiting

I dream in silence While alone in time's stillness You will disembark As I await your return Warmly clothed in loneliness

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Date: 9/3/2014 10:53:00 AM

Disembark Time's stillness. I like the deathly quality of your Tanka. The reader is presented with eternity and speculation. Great stuff. daver

Date: 8/31/2014 4:10:00 AM

Congratulations Frederic! This is a lovely tanka with a sturdy pivot to go with it. Well done! // paul

Date: 8/29/2014 1:39:00 AM

Nice yearning, Frederic. congrats

Date: 8/28/2014 4:50:00 PM

Frederic, Congratulations, on your winning Tanka, SKAT LOVE

Date: 8/28/2014 2:24:00 PM

Love the last line Frederic, it places the entirety of the poem in a sweet cocoon.

Date: 8/28/2014 1:55:00 PM

Frederic,,, Congrats on your "Hope, Faith and Love Tanka win." Love Linda

Date: 8/28/2014 11:30:00 AM

I love the last line of the poem too:-) many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Date: 8/26/2014 6:14:00 PM

I enjoyed hearing about you and your own life with the comment left on my poem about the cemetery.

Date: 8/26/2014 6:13:00 PM

this is just beautiful! the last line is so creative!!

Date: 8/24/2014 1:27:00 PM

packed with a haunting mood, Frederic.. another winner!.. huggs

Frederic Parker
Date: 8/24/2014 5:17:00 PM

thank you nette, for reading and for your kindness