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Wailing

no one knows nothing when wrapped with smooth silver silence some secrets sleep. helpless heart hopes love lives long but beneath betrayal deep desires die. time twists tides some sail safe some seize sand while wailing waiting. poem you are proud of #2 poetry contest Sponsored by: SKAT A May 9, 2016

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Date: 2/1/2021 7:47:00 PM
I have not tried to write poetry as you do. I thought your pattern was wonderful. George.
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Date: 1/25/2021 10:55:00 PM
I like this pattern -I’ll have to try alliteration sometime.
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Date: 1/25/2021 5:38:00 PM
Wise work. Very well put together. Beautiful.
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Date: 6/14/2016 2:11:00 AM
AWESOME PIECE....THIS IS WHAT WE CALL AMAZING
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Date: 5/13/2016 1:24:00 PM
Meenakshi Raina, Congratulations on the win. Stop and enjoy my blog "Peace is a Fugitive." SKAT LOVE
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Date: 5/6/2016 3:11:00 PM
I do know not what exactly should I write. This is just full 7, thank you. WW
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/9/2016 1:13:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 3/3/2016 7:52:00 AM
perfectly pretty poetry
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 3/3/2016 10:32:00 AM
Thank you...

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